None us in this so
burdened earth has known
how to live, let alone
who is too many.
Presence, each day
afresh, you give a
purifying signal to
sting us alive.
Vast territories and seashores
still bear these thronging
strangers . May none die
without somebody caring.
To know even one other is
costly. And being known.
Alive, among so many
more now? a concern…
Hunger makes men desperate, threatens
to congeal the quandary. Yet
Presence abides untouched
in the churn if Quantity.
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Analysis of the poem To Counter Malthus by Margaret Avison
First of all, it is necesary to point some characteristics out about Margaret Avison and Thomas Robert Malthus’ theory. Margaret Avison has the reputation of being a cerebral poet. Her work has been characterized as “intellectual” and “deliberate”. Her use of word-play, disconcerting shifts in viewpoint, complex metaphors, and literary allusions make her poetry a challenge to read. She exposes to the readers her favourite themes: the love and power of God. Thomas Robert Malthus developed a famous theory: the growth of the population vs the production of food. In other words, if the people feel better, I mean, if they have great conditions of life, as health, good houses and benefits, they will have more and more children. So, the growth of the population become a chaos and the food starts not to be enough for the population.
None us in this so
burdened earth has known
how to live, let alone
who is too many.
Since this stanza the poet shows that she is against the Malthus’ ideas. The poet says that there is no way of to make a theory of how to live in the earth and how to relate with others. The poet decides to put the malthus’ideas out of the real possibility. Then, the comma is used to separate the poet position, that she is against ‘handbooks’ about how to life in the earth, from her opinion, that people should not consider who has the same thoughts as Malthus.
Presence, each day
afresh, you give a
purifying signal to
sting us alive.
Firstly, between the commas, there is an explanation for the word ‘Presence’. Secondly, the poet personifies the word ‘Presence’ as Christ. He represents a help, a support for the people’s life.
Vast territories and seashores
still bear these thronging
strangers . May none die
without somebody caring.
In this stanza the full stop finishes one idea to start another one. They contrast each other and it gives a beautiful conclusion. Until the first full stop the poet says that we live in an extensive place where exist many strangers. After the full stop the poet says that everybody has a person who will worry with their death. In other words, in spite of we life with different people in the earth we need to consider the possibility of the people feel worried about the human being death.
To know even one other is
costly. And being known.
Alive, among so many
more now? a concern…
This part of the poem is composed by the poet thoughts. It is about the human being situation. She has ‘flashes’ of thoughts. It is symbolized by the short sentences and a question. Also, after the question, she does not use capitalized letter and there is ellipsis. It represents that the poet starts to think in a conclusion.
Hunger makes men desperate, threatens
to congeal the quandary. Yet
Presence abides untouched
in the churn if Quantity.
In this stanza the poet concludes her thoughts. Until the first full stop the poet agree with the idea of a men become desperate because of the hunger caused by the growth of the population. After the full stop the poet concludes that this theory is not useful. Also, there is the possibility of ‘Presence’, I mean, Christ, tolerate this kind of trivial theory. It is because the theory of Quantity does not influence in the life. It is going on in spite of the human being explanations.